Blog Tour Goes to Cafe Bassam and Nia Class

May 6th, 2014

BassamThank you to J. Dylan Yates, who invited me to follow her on this blog tour. Dylan’s first novel came out just a week ago! Called “The Belief in Angels,” it’s about a young woman growing up in her parents’ wild-hippie household … and fascinated by the stories of her grandfather, a Jewish Holocaust survivor. Dylan and I recently took our blog tour to Cafe Bassam in the Hillcrest neighborhood of San Diego. You can find out more about Dylan and her book here.

Doing the tour involves answering four questions, which puts me in mind of the Passover seder.

1. What am I working on? I’m about 200 pages into a new novel, “Tower of Song.” The name is the title of a song by the brilliant, mordant Leonard Cohen. Cohen’s “Tower of Song” is a funny-sad lament about aging, and aging is a theme of my book, which opens with the 50th birthday party of Aaron Rochman. Unlike “The Tin Horse,” which I wrote in the first person from Elaine’s point of view, each member of Aaron’s California Jewish family gets chapters in which we see life through his or her eyes. There’s Aaron, his parents (who are divorced), and his son and daughter, in their twenties.

Another connection with the Leonard Cohen song is that there’s a line about being “born with the gift of a golden voice” – it’s ironic when Cohen croaks it out, but Aaron’s son, Rocky, really does have a golden voice; he’s been trying to make it as a singer-musician, but early in the book, he decides to go to cantorial school. The rest of his very secular family figures he’s just letting go of his pipe dream of stardom and choosing something more practical, but Rocky has found God. That’s just one of the complications I’m having fun with. In fact, my writers group tells me that this book is funny! I didn’t know I could do funny, so I am trying to get used to the idea.

2. How does my work differ from others of its genre? See, this really is like a seder – why is this night different from other nights? There are a lot of great Jewish family novels, but California Jewish family novels? This wasn’t anything I consciously considered when I started “The Tin Horse” – I just wanted write about a minor character in the detective novel “The Big Sleep,” a woman described as having the “fine-drawn face of an intelligent Jewess.” And, because “The Big Sleep” takes place in Los Angeles in the late 30s, my character had to live in that time and place. I had a sense of Jewish immigrant life in the 20s and 30s through fiction and through my family’s stories, but all of those take place “back East,” as we Californians call anywhere east of the Mississippi. (I was surprised when I moved here to learn that my hometown of Milwaukee was “back east.”)

2014-04-24 17.25.01As I researched L.A.’s Jewish immigrant neighborhood of Boyle Heights, I realized that the Southern California Jewish experience – living in bungalows rather than tenements, having lemon and fig trees in the yard, having the Old Country not just an ocean but an ocean and a continent away – had a particular flavor and character. In my new book, members of the family live up and down the coast – in L.A., a San Diego beach community, the Central Coast, and the Bay area – and I’m doing more with uniquely California settings. (Photo is of jacaranda, which blooms here in April-May.)

3. Why do I write what I do? This question suggests that there’s a choice, that I could be writing something else. But I’m not one of those writers who has a file of 80 ideas and needs to pick one. One idea grabs me at a time, but it really grabs hard.

4. How does my writing process work? I start by creating a diary for the book, where I put down ideas about characters and relationships, story, research needs, etc. There’s always something to research, and I do some of that before I write anything. At a certain point, I’ll hear the first sentence in my mind. That sentence may not survive as the opening – it didn’t in “The Tin Horse” – but it gets me going. I write in chapters rather than scenes, and I’m a linear writer – I do chapters in the order in which I see them appearing. At times, I do go back and rework an earlier chapter; often, that’s based on getting feedback from my writers’ group and realizing I need to go more deeply into a particular character from the beginning.

Writing habits: My peak creative time is first thing in the morning. When I was writing “The Tin Horse” and juggling a lot of other projects, I’d set a timer for an hour or two, as much time as I could carve out, and make that my sacred writing time. And I mean sacred – if I got up to use the bathroom, I stopped the timer. I’ve always been a keyboard person – I wrote my first story at age 7 when I learned to hunt and peck on the typewriter – and I write primarily on the computer. When I get stuck, though, I find it useful to pick up a pen (a fountain pen, black ink) and handwrite; I think it engages somewhat different neural pathways.

carolynNext stop on the tour is Carolyn Marsden. Carolyn is the author of 14 novels for young adults and/or middle grade readers. Her books take the reader on a journey to countries and cultures around the world – including Thailand, Iraq, and Czechoslovakia under Communist rule. Carolyn is also a visual artist, and her work is marked by vivid, poetic images. I have the privilege of getting to swim in this evocative language, since Carolyn is a member of my writers group. She’s also one of my Nia students, and we took this photo before class.

 

7 Rules to Write By – Links to All 7!

December 26th, 2013

BellesPromessesFor everyone who’s making a New Year’s resolution to finally start – or finish – that novel … here, in one place, are all 7 of my rules to write by, with links to the blog for each one. I’m using a pic from when I found the French edition of “The Tin Horse in a bookstore on the Left Bank, because it was such a thrill. The French publisher decided to call it “Les Belles Promesses” – the beautiful promises.

Here are my rules. Wishing you happy, brilliant, satisfying writing – with love and support from everyone in your life – in 2014.

1. Go toward what scares you.

2. Do the work.

3. Find the right critique group for you. Plus 3a on how to critique.

4. Have the will and skill to revise.

5. Write a strong query.

6. Choose your agent carefully.

7. Choose an editor who shares your vision.

Thou Shalt Afflict Thy Protagonist

November 7th, 2013
Drawing by George Cruikshank

George Cruikshank engraving

It happened again yesterday. A friend in my writers group kept taking her protagonist into situations that made everyone squirm … but then backed off. For instance … The character is an immigrant maid, and the house in which she works gets sold. She meets the new owner, including his flirtatious twenty-something son. The maid is staying in the house alone just before the new owners move in, and the son shows up in the middle of the night. She throws a shawl over her nightgown and lets him in. He pours himself a glass of brandy and offers one to her. Why not? she thinks. Uh-oh, we know what’s coming. But it doesn’t! She drinks her brandy, returns to her room, locks the door, and spends a peaceful night, her virtue unassailed.

Granted, the young aristo putting a mash on the maid is a cliché, and that, my friend said, was why she didn’t want to go there. But just about everything and everyone in the protagonist’s life is nice. That’s a problem, and not just because “niceness” is antithetical to drama. A character grows through facing adversity. That means you have to put your beloved protagonist through the wringer.

As screenwriting guru Robert McKee says in Story, “True character is revealed in the choices a human being makes under pressure – the greater the pressure, the deeper the revelation, the truer the choice to the character’s essential nature.”

The characters we love must be unfairly accused, cheated in love and in business, press-ganged, betrayed, tricked, thrown into excruciating social situations, saddled with unbearable family members, threatened, laughed at, imperiled, spurned, one-upped, opposed, dragged through the mud, humiliated, misunderstood, pummeled, starved. (Depending on the kind of book you’re writing, this suffering may be literal, or it may be purely psychological). We need to subject our protagonists to experience loneliness, anxiety, misery, loss.

If your gentle writerly self balks at being so cruel, consider: what if, when Oliver Twist asked, “Please, sir, I want some more,” a kindly soul had smiled and filled his bowl? A happier life for young Oliver. For the rest of us, deprivation.